Tuesday, March 29, 2005

Silverfish

Sent my entry for the SIlverfish New Writings 5. Hope it got through... hope this could be my motivator.

"Father took the cigarette, put on the light, puffing smoke vigorously. I can see he satisfied with whatever he is doing.

Mother took the cloth; bring it to the sewing machine, adjusting the needle, and started paddling. I can see she had no choice but to do it.

Father asked for a drink.

Mother made it for him.

“It’s not right, the water not hot enough!”

Mother obediently take it back to the kitchen, make another cup.
Father take a sip, then gulping away. Took the car key, the hat, and off he went for work....."

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