Sent my entry for the SIlverfish New Writings 5. Hope it got through... hope this could be my motivator.
"Father took the cigarette, put on the light, puffing smoke vigorously. I can see he satisfied with whatever he is doing.
Mother took the cloth; bring it to the sewing machine, adjusting the needle, and started paddling. I can see she had no choice but to do it.
Father asked for a drink.
Mother made it for him.
“It’s not right, the water not hot enough!”
Mother obediently take it back to the kitchen, make another cup.
Father take a sip, then gulping away. Took the car key, the hat, and off he went for work....."
